๐ŸŽFor You… Okay, For Me Too

Quite honored to post the achievements on tonight endeavors. I have finally completed the first draft of two shorts and Iโ€™m ninety thousand words into Tellus ๐ŸŽ‰ To celebrate these glorious accomplishments, I’m sharing a snippet from my recently completed first draft, Craving Candy.


Lana leaned over the railing, a cigarette lodge between her fingers and a smartphone in her other hand. Her apron was scrunched on the handle bar, revealing her low-cut skirt and a tattoo of a cartoon dazed snake, ingesting small multicolored pills. She scrolled the page of a website with a midnight background and came across an image of a girl wearing a violet and cyan lingerie with the username Craving Candy.ย  The girl was barely of age and yet she gripped on the bloody whip like a dominatrix. On another photo, she was crawled on top of a dismembered man with blood splattered on her face. ย She chuckled. โ€œShould have edited that one more.โ€

Lana was half way through her cigarette when she received an incoming call. She answered through her Bluetooth. โ€œLana, here.โ€

On the other line a girl sniffled then with a shaky voice she spoke, โ€œHey, what you doing?โ€

โ€œOn break.โ€ Lana exhaled a cloud of tobacco then took her gaze to the moon. The girl heaved a cough and Lana winced. โ€œWhat do you want?โ€ She took another hit from her cigarette, watching the fire burn toward her fingers.

โ€œCome back home. Mom said sheโ€™ll forgive you.โ€

Lana averted her attention to her phone. She clicked the comment section under an image of a promiscuous girl. She read some of the responses. They were either from women marauding on the same gender. Or men who thought of sex as an experiment of finding oneself. Lana curled a smiled to one user. She tapped his profile and it expanded in another window. She pushed herself off the railing, turned then leaned against it. โ€œI told you, I’m working. Plus, I told mom, I needed to settle it myself. Not to mention, I wasnโ€™t looking for her forgiveness.โ€


As always donโ€™t be shy in the comments. I love to hear from you โ˜บ

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